Free songwriting advice. The chorus goes "'Cause I'm a businessman, businessman. I'm a businessman. 'Cause I'm a businessman, businessman. I mean business, man."
Just that one little tweak. Well you could also say of your BMW that it's black not blue, but on the whole I think the lapse into non rhyme there is more effective than otherwise.
Good job. Keep expressing the depth of your soul through the medium of songwriting, Mr. Vilderman.
Just that one little tweak. Well you could also say of your BMW that it's black not blue, but on the whole I think the lapse into non rhyme there is more effective than otherwise.
Good job. Keep expressing the depth of your soul through the medium of songwriting, Mr. Vilderman.
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