Okay. Here it is. Down to the wire. I'm just going to let fly, let the creative juices fly.
Don't let any get on ya now.
You know, I hope you appreciate the fact that I could have just snuck a poem out from my secret poetry blog and passed it off as if it had just been written, but nope. NOPE sir. Not me. That wouldn't be square.
So I'm just going to have to go off. Bus' it.
A poem.
A poem about...heck, who cares at this point. A dang POEM at any rate.
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my hands gone cold in yours so warm
you've caught my breath, at last
With just one look you stop my heart, but
my blood flows twice as fast
I can't describe the shape you make
inside my heart and mind
picture all the universe,
as chains of stars unwind
you've knocked them out of orbits
by the sheer force of your pull
they all fall into circles,
concentric upon you
My forehead up to yours
the firmament on 'spin'
our love is heavier than suns
the universe leans in
our hands enlaced
collapsing star
drawn further in
to where we are
forever
Don't let any get on ya now.
You know, I hope you appreciate the fact that I could have just snuck a poem out from my secret poetry blog and passed it off as if it had just been written, but nope. NOPE sir. Not me. That wouldn't be square.
So I'm just going to have to go off. Bus' it.
A poem.
A poem about...heck, who cares at this point. A dang POEM at any rate.
close
my hands gone cold in yours so warm
you've caught my breath, at last
With just one look you stop my heart, but
my blood flows twice as fast
I can't describe the shape you make
inside my heart and mind
picture all the universe,
as chains of stars unwind
you've knocked them out of orbits
by the sheer force of your pull
they all fall into circles,
concentric upon you
My forehead up to yours
the firmament on 'spin'
our love is heavier than suns
the universe leans in
our hands enlaced
collapsing star
drawn further in
to where we are
andtime skipslightspeed standing still
we know what comes next,
And we can wait -
forever
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I have gambled away our nest egg
And sold the children
Into slavery
Even though
You were probably
Going to take them
To the park this afternoon
Forgive me
They were being annoying.
Oh, and I
Burned down the house.
*Yes, I stole the concept. Look it up.
But nice variant on the theme! What did you attach the note to, though, with the house burned down and all?
Damn, now I want plums.
*sigh*